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My muse falls into silent contemplation
And I am once more thrilled by his expression,
For even without words he inspires
Within me hot passion and burning desires.
I cannot write fast enough to cool that ache within--
And not to write at all for him-- that would be a sin.
So my fingers fly-- across the earth I seek
For some words that will make this madness weak.
Instead I’m driven further by the burning in his eyes,
My silent, watching muse so beautiful and wise.
©2007-2009 ~Alucinor-Mors
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It's a very short poem I wrote on the fly.

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:iconestravitello:
"So my fingers fly...Across the earth I seek....I'm driven further..."

I love your use of movement--it shows that you are constantly moving towards or driven by your muse. Unlike Yeats who wrote the poem, "O Bright Star," In that poem he talked about how he wished he could stay on his muses breast, never roaming from her soft ripe breast that he would rest his head upon.

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Hmmm... wow. Yeats and I are very different people.

You have a good head for literature, Tello. Thank you for the compliments.

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Hhaha....well Yes you and yeats are very different people indeed....and I actually like literature quite a bit. I love interpretating it and explaining it to friends who are confused....I can get a bit *XD* Charasimatic at times.

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You write good poetry on the fly. Of course, on the fly is when we experience things, so it can be the best time to write.

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I thought you had forsaken deviantART. I'm glad to find you haven't, an excellent piece.

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That's very true... And why I wrote so much better poetry when I carried a notebook with me everywhere. I need to do that again. Thank you.

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Yeah, I need to get back into that habit too. My best poetry has been on retreats out in nature.

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